quality blog comment

WALT we are learning to write quality blog comment

today i got to post a quality blog comment. [its below]

psalms8318September 17, 2018 at 11:12 AM

Troy i really like your sun it looks so cool it looks so fiery and hot.
what is the name of your hottest planet?   

Quality blog comment

WALT we are learning to write quality blog comments.

my solar system

hi my name is Tane and I'm going o talk to you about our solar systems and why they're interesting.

First we had to do our writing and put it onto pages second we had to draw our planets and colour them then cut them.third we got a black piece of paper and stick our planets on our paper and then we printed  our work and cut it out and then put our writing on the bottom of our planets and then there's your master piece. by TANE

What do you like about it?