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Wednesday, August 8, 2018

my solar system

hi my name is Tane and I'm going o talk to you about our solar systems and why they're interesting.

 First we had to do our writing and put it onto pages second we had to draw our planets and colour them then cut them.third we got a black piece of paper and stick our planets on our paper and then we printed  our work and cut it out and then put our writing on the bottom of our planets and then there's your master piece. by TANE

 What do you like about it?


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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 10:50 AM

    Hi Tane this is jesse your friend I think your work is cool and interesting I have liked it as interesting and cool!

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  2. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 10:53 AM

    hi Jesse thank for opinion

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  3. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 10:54 AM

    thank you But do you want to go on mine?

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  4. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:16 AM

    Nice work Tane.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:18 AM

    meh

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  6. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:19 AM

    thanks mihi

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  7. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:19 AM

    meh I do not like it.

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  8. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:22 AM

    its good lol

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  9. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:22 AM

    cool

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  10. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:28 AM

    cool its really funny cause you added your head.

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  11. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:43 AM

    I'm sorry and it was a joke and what do you want to say.

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  12. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:48 AM

    Great description Tane. Keep it up!

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  13. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:50 AM

    thank you star bright

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  14. AnonymousAugust 20, 2018 at 11:51 AM

    good work tane good long wrirting

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  15. VenessaSeptember 4, 2018 at 10:00 AM

    HI Tane, I don't think I met you yesterday. I'm looking forward to working in your class this term. I have noticed that you haven't used your punctuation correctly. I like all the colour you used for the planets. What's one interesting fact you can share with me about the solar system? ~Mrs Davan~

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2018 at 11:37 AM

    cool spaces art Tane

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  17. Tane.c@belfas.school.nzOctober 26, 2018 at 10:30 AM

    Hi Tane. My name is Tane from Belfast school.I like your solar system because it really describes it for me.Where did you get your facts? Next time maybe you should fix your punctuation.

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  18. AnonymousOctober 26, 2018 at 10:43 AM

    thank you Tane well i got my facts from my teacher Mrs Meyers we have been learning about space. what sports do you like?

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